Part 4Listen to: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aFIXKXYfEy0&feature=fvwrel After they get up, coughing up the dust out of their mouths, Molly and Maggie look out the window and see a monstrous black tower raised from the ground; its glass center glowing red and still steaming from the last use. “It’s operational, at night,” Molly says in disbelief. Maggie answers, “It…must be battery charged. We didn’t even think of…See More
Part 3Listen to: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DSx_N18TWjs&feature=fvwrel Falling star yells, “They shot out the beam! I can’t believe they saw us coming!” Plane yells, “Hold on!” Falling Star howls as Plane makes Legend do a barrel roll as a stream of bullets passes them by. The few that hits them bounce off the armor shell, but leaves dents. As Legend is straighten, Plane yells, “Drop the good package!” “On it,”…See More
Peace Keepers Part 1Listen to: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P3L9n-HG5xY A group of cats enter an abandon theatre, blending to the night in their black robes and black Drama face masks – Comedies oriented. The leader hits a sequence of buttons that appears when he steps on a loose floor board. The front wall rises and they enter a furnished room where a meeting is already taking place. The cats join the hundreds that are seated in…See More
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hey man I've been there, literally. take this for what its worth, I tried like you say to win a spot in some publication, and I never did. well that is until I stopped thinking about winning and just wrote a story I liked. It's like they say wright what you know and it will be believable. wright what you like and you'll just rehash what you've read. but hey man take that for what its worth (probably jack shit) and good luck in your quest to be published. oh and when i say I won I mean my story got an honorable mention in the finger lakes literary bi annual publication. But that was enough to please me.
man its been rough, were moving to Milwaukee in 5 weeks we have a 14 month old baby and my girl is pregnant, and on top of all that she slipped in a hole and sprained one ankle and broke the other. so I'm lucky that I found 5 min to check my page. how are you?if you like this pic click on it the zoom it to full size and it make a VERY nice desktop pic, have a good one!
yes i find it very helpful it is a group of aspiring writers some even went to college for it so their critisism is good to hear no matter if its goodor bad it helps you develope a better story but if you are writing a book it is always bad luck to let someone read it before it is finished lol so i have found i havent read your stuff but i would like to always like good stories. so what kind of stories you write? I write scfi fantasy horror and detective stories cause i like those type of stories superheroes some people like those type of stories but it is hard to be original in superhero form guy did an excellent job with superheroes in his story but i am writing my story and posting it on spill the corpse undead detective story and dead mans gun which im hoping acomic book company will let me publish those well hope i was helpful hit me up man anytime peace
Your obviously a trek fan, and if you love some good old janeway bashing then yous should watch some of these reviews. If your not familiar with his work he is sfdebris and he dose lots of episode reviews/guides