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Have the idea for the perfect script, but just can't get to page one? Stuck on page 30 and need to discuss what might be the issue? Or are you done and just want to work on your pitch?
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@ VinnyLT: No, these are screenplays that I've written or am planning to write. Just looking for some feedback on how the "Log-Line" and "Pitches" sound. You can tell a lot about what a movie is going to be like just by its log-line, genre description, and a comparison pitch. For example Avatar = Dances with Wolves meets The Blue Man Group.
Comment by VinnyLT on September 6, 2012 at 4:11pm @ OperaW is this for a game or a possible Book? I know a lot of video games spin off into novels.
Comment by VinnyLT on August 23, 2012 at 1:45am Thanks for the invite. Also glad to be apart.
Ok, I guess I'll be the one to post first. I got a couple of projects rolling around.
One completed, one just getting started.
1.) Title: Mass Effect (completed)
Genre: Sci/Fi-Fantasy
Log Line: In the year 2184 Captain Shepherd of the human Alliance must lead a volitile group of soldiers and scientists to capture a fugitive, what they find will change our world forever.
Pitch: Star Trek meets The Fugitive
2.) Last of the Breed (starting)
Based loosly off the book Last of the Breed by Louis L'amour
Genre: Action
Log Line: During the Cold War two American pilots are shot down over the Siberia. In an attempt to escape to Alaska they must overcome the elements, an obsessed Russian general, a maniacal madman, and themselves.
Pitch: Behind Enemy Lines meets Dances with Wolves
Comment by Zgamer on August 20, 2012 at 3:37pm Hello! Aspiring film student :) Glad to join here
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