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it shall begin!

witten and co. are lounging about the evil corp. research and technology bureau compund. doing important business......absolutely nothing.

witten: *witten leans back on chair, with his feet on the table and playing with a paddle ball*
KFS: there's nothing to do here. what's the point in spending days upon days of research to increase our powers by a miniscule amount if there's no one to test our powers on?
witten: we need some ass to kick!
KUI: dont be a simpleton people! we have that machine that we built to practically keep our powers bonded together stronger.
KFS: yeah, you mean the bonding maintainer?
KUI: couldnt we improve it? that's practically what keeps our powers joined together nowadays. since we built that machine to maintain our joined powers we've been stronger than ever! without it our powers would be seperated again and we wouldnt be anywhere near as strong as we are now.
witten: imrovements would take ages and security on that thing is tight already i mean this is evil corp. at least joining D has its advantages we dont have to wander around the universe like we use to. and i've found many interesting things since we got here. like this info that i found recently
KFS: what is it?
KUI: *sigh* hold that thought the sensors detected something at the manintainer's room.
*KUI heads to the bonding mainainer room where the machine that controls and automatically increases and balances the tech-particles that join KUI, KFS and witten's powers is stored. KUI enters the room to find a bomb planted at the bottom of the machine with a note that reads

"let's see who is the REAL master of technology. we have the bomb's codes, your con-joined powers are at our mercy - NMD and co."

*outside, an explosion rips apart the walls to the technology buraeus compund and alarms sound. NMD, XXQZLR and Raijin casualy step through the rubble and enter the compound and quickly silence the alarms*

witten: *calmly puts his paddle ball back on the table and stands up to see NMD, xxqzlr and raijin.* well look who we have here. *witten grins* looks like we'll kick some ass after all.




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chronos 5: yield! i request that you surreneder , in order to make our plan be accomplished more quickly. resisting is useless the probability that you will win is......

*hyorin suddenly tries to catch chronos 5 off guard by quickly teleporting and slicing him. chronos 5 is sliced in half and lifelessly falls.*

hyorin: all war is based on deception *hyorin grins*

*chronos 5 then suddenly regenrates, becoming chrono 4 (because now he has 4 lives left)*

chronos 4: one life down, but i have 4 left. don't think you can kill the rest of my lives so easily again. i'm sure you'll find we learn from our mistakes, VERY well. i must admit though, killing off one of my lives that easily is quite an accomplishment.normally we'd be able to regenrate our lives, but in this case it seems you can permanently eliminate them. it must be that sword of yours.

*KFS tries to attack chronos 4 from behind but her attack is effortlessly blocked by KUI. He grins and then roundhouse kicks KFS. hyorin tries to teleport to help KFS but he's blocked by chronos 4*

chrono 4: you'll have to get through me first!

hyorin: very well then.

*chronos 4 launches himself at hyorin like a missle with his sword as the point. hyorin dodges the mid-air attack. chronos 4 expects hyorin to attack back and quickly assumes the guard position, but hyorin is nowhere in sight. Meanwhile, KFS is getting beaten badly by a better, faster, stronger KUI. she's on knee, using her katana as support to keep her upright.*

KUI: shame, this fight was getting fun. too bad it had to end oh so quickly.....

(listen to the vid whist continuing to read)


*KUI casualy walks up to a weakened and bloodied KFS. KFS tries to attack, but her attacks are so weak, KUI is even able to block them with his hand. eventualy KUI easily knocks the katana from her hand. KUI tries to use hand-to-hand combat, but her punches are dodged by KUI flawlessly, and he easily counter-attacks her slow punches. KFS is knocked to the ground (which has turned muddy due to all the rain caused by the fights affecting the weather), she struggles to even get back to her knees*

KUI: i really hoped you'd put up a better fight *he kicks KFS in the gut* i really did! *he kicks her again*
and now, on this rainy night, on this muddy ground. you lay face first, defeated! if you were more like me i would've asked you to be my partner in our plan. but i knew you were too loyal to witten's cause, which is why you are where you are now.

*KUI begins the process of opening the infinite null void to seal KFS.and he says goodbye to KFS in an old world language. but just as he's about to open the void hyorin appears behind him, he stabs KUI and through his katana he opens an instant temporary void which will seal KUI for a short period of time.*

*hyorin picks up KFS and places her over his shoulder as she begins to regain consciencenous*

hyorin: i've placed KUI in a temporary seal, he'll be back soon, which is why we have to hurry. i'm gonna place you in a secure location. then i'm gonna kill off chronos 4 before KUI get back, then i'll turn my attention to KUI.

chronos 4: what a smart plan! *chronos 4 suddenly appears in front of them. hyorin and KFs are shocked*
disappearing from the fight and then cleverly hiding your tracks, too bad it didnt take me long to figure out where you were. your plan is perfect, except do you really think you can kill me off before kui arrives? you under-estimate me hyorin, and that is a mistake you'll only make once!

*chronos 4 attacks hyorin, but its almost impossible to defned himself while carrying KFS. hyorin tries to teleport to the secure location to place KFS. but he is stopped by chronos 4 who manages to strike him sending him and KFS straight to the ground.

On the ground, KFS is motionless on the ground and hyorin get back to his feet ready to fight. but chronos 4 slices him again before he's ready.*

chronos 4: i shall end this fight now!

*chronos 4 moves in for the kill, but then KFS suddenly appears behind chronos 4 and stabs him. getting rid of one of his lives*

chronos 3: how did you...

KFS: war is all about deception


(listen to the vid whilst continuing to read)

*KFS uses a device that paralyzes chrono 3 for just several seconds, long enough for hyorin to charge up his incredibly powerful laser blast, many times more powerful than the one he used on KUI perviously. hyorin shoots. the blast instantly kills off one of chrono 3's lives making him chrono 2*

KFS thinks to herself: i knew it! he had to have a more powerful laser blast!

*chronos 2 full regenerates*

chronos 2: never mind that, i still have two lives, enough to kill both of you!

KFS; i dont't think thats anywhere near enough! * KFS katana becomes the weight of mountains and she strikes it down on chronos 2, who can barely block the massive force of the attack*
hyorin, now!

*while chronos 2 is pre-occupied with trying to hold KFS' attack, hyorin's katan breaks up into individual atoms and enter chronos 2's body through whatever means, it wreaks havoc inside his body before bursting back out trough the same way it came. chronso 2's skin, mouth, eyes, ears, nose all begin to bleed out and chronos 2, severely weakened, collapses and no longer able to hold KFS's attack. KFS' attack crushes him, erasing another one of his live, turning him to just chronos.*

hyorin: and now, for the grand finale.




*KFS becomes a massive bubble which seals both hyorin and chrono inside. inside the bubble, no light or sound travels within. its completely dark and quiet. chrono can only see and hear hyorin.*

chronos: how can this be!?

hyorin: i suspected you build up a form of immunity after an attack, which is why we always used a sligtly or very different attack to deal with you and get rid of your lives. this one's my favorite, sayonara chronos.

*hyorin's body breaks up to individual atoms and chronos cannot see or hear anything. suddenly he feels a piercing pain as the atoms of hyorins body have hardened and are ricocheting all over the wall of the bubble at over the speed of light and then piercing through his body like a bullet through paper. he can neither see or hear them, and he can't anticipate their movements either and ther are too small and too many to block. eventually chronos begins to quickly disintegrate in a matter of seconds as the atoms and molecules rip his body to shreds*

*hyorin and KFS go back to their regular forms. meanwhile, the sky is ripping as KUI begins to escape the temorary seal *

hyorin: let's go join witten and NMD, KUI will certainly chase after us. i think we can lure him into a trap with NMD and quantum bomb.

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To Witten, i gat nothing new to say. It's jsut as bad as the one witten just did.

However the music did add to is and in a way saved it.

The music was indeed a smart move if i may say so my self.

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To NMD.

Oh wtf... This is the bastard child of Dr.Who and Bleach.

It just makes me sick, even some of the shit the children say it right from Dr.Who ... why do you even coll them the children, just coll them Daleks.

Both you and witten fucked up on that one, i hope you can somehow save yourself from your DOOM.

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(Listen to the video while continuing to read, stop this video when you reach the next video)

KUI finally is free from Hyorin's seal his body start to reject the children's bio-robotic molecular structure. Causing a lot of pain to KUI.A voice appear in KUI head that mock him saying that he was a pathetic warrior that even if he still had the children tech, he would still lose to Witten. That if he truly wishes to undo Witten once and for all he would need another source of power one as ancient as the LOC’s themselves.

KUI: Who do you think you are talking too?
The voice: I know who you really are a traitor forever looking for power. Whose wish is to eliminate Witten and all your enemies, even if it means helping a group of psychotic machine that wish to cause mass genocide?
* KUI grins evilly*

The voice: Truly pathetic, they're using you, manipulating your every action. Ironic isn’t it a master of technology being control by machine.

KUI: How dare you say such blasphemy? The voice: Don’t you know that I wish Witten destruction as much as you do. I only wish to help the enemy of my enemy do what I couldn’t...... achieve his destruction.

KUI: How do you propose I gain this power you speak of?

The voice: Is so simple unleash the darkness within your soul let it overcome you embrace the darkness only then can your true power be unleash. *A blade appears in front of KUI*
The voice: There take the blade plunge thought your heart then all your spiritual presion will be surrender to darkness itself. Then your true power will be granted.

KUI: Sure getting stab by a sword in the heart will give me awesome powers that make lots of sense. I guess I got nothing to lose at least is better than dying here being so close from destroying Witten.*

KUI stab himself with the blade*the blade transform into a black liquid KUI body start to change it grows and grows until it take the size of a planet. Then his body become as dark as the empty of space, the body start too becomes a giant sphere made of pure darkness. The sphere starts to absorb the energy of the planets and stars around the sphere. The sphere becomes too unstable force in it to explode. From the explosion a dark sadistic creature with the size of a planet is bornthe creature is Demonic KUI new demonic form born from the anger, hatred and darkness itself.

WW itten and NMD finally arrive to the control panel. NMD access the mainframe to override the Quantum Bomb. The children chrono overrun the control panel.*NMD press so button that make the main computer to put a shield around it and make it go to the lower floor like a elevators*Some of the children make it inside the main computer before the shield were activated. Witten unsheathed his blade and start cutting them down one by one in different ways to make sure they can’t become immune to the attacks. But they have too many lives and he only has so many different attacks. *NMD takes out a small device and presses a button* that make the chrono children inside the main computer unexploded upon themselves.

NMD: I am sorry Witten but once the Quantum Bomb has initiated countdown it cannot be stop. Raijin have not being able to see the source of its energy. They must be stop by lowering the energy so the blast cannot resonate across the creation it will destroy this universe but at least there will be other universes. Witten you are needed to distract the children from getting to me until Raijin can get the source of the Quantum bomb energy. The children chrono having absorbing the energy of Witten as he was fighting him Witten is tired of the fight his spiritual pressure is really low. But the children just keep on coming so Witten uses an Uber powerful blast that destroy the floor giving him a chance to go after the main computer. But KUI is able to arrive to the base at a incredible speed.

The chrono children: So he has become stronger, no matter we have studied his design down to a molecular level. We have created the perfect weapon against him we only need some Intel of his new form.

Demonic KUI: So this is the base of those pathetic kids of NMD. *KUI grins*

(Listen to the video while continuing to read, stop this video when you reach the next video)

*KUI blast the base with a ridiculous blast of black dark energy*the base absorb the energy by a shield created by the children Intel on NMD crystal. KUI get closer to the base to track Witten and kill him personally. But a army of chrono children 1000 teleport close to KUI and blast him with residual energy of the Quantum bomb. KUI is able to absorb the energy blast this ability surprise not just the children but KUI himself. The main base activates the main and most powerful weapon. The weapon fire a laser that hits KUI it does no damage to his new body. But the children continue to fire their own type of laser using different type of energy to learn from KUI new body. KUI become irritated by the children energy blasts.

KUI: ROOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAARRRRRR*the roar of KUI causes a sonic boom so powerful it destroy all the children life’s in one blast. KUI: What is happening to me? KUI begins to puke a black glowing blood. The blast from the children and the main weapon has altered his molecular structure causing him to become too unstable. He begins to grow and grow but his skin begins to decompose. Then it starts mutating at an incredible level he starts absorbing the energy of the stars and planet around the quadrant. He become a fat decompose mutant that continue to grow twice his size at an incredible speed.*the new deform demonic start to absorb KUI own consciousness into energy for his own body. Because of this KUI loses his rational mind and know is replace by a mind of a bloodthirsty animal. KUI new deform body tries to eat the base to absorb the Quantum bomb energy. But the base activates a shield around the base stopping KUI. This makes him angry and start to engorge itself in the energy of the shield.

That causes KUI to grow stronger and bigger every second. KUI is able to destroy the shield in a matter of second. KUI has become the size of the base .KUI grab a weakened Witten after the fight against the children chrono and tries to crush him with his bare hand. But Hyorin and KFS arrive thanks to Raijin by passing some of her endless energy into Hyorin and KFS causing their own spiritual energy heal their wounds. Hyorin cut down KUI arm of KFS take Witten unconscious body away to Raijin so she can heal him like she heal them. But the new deform KUI stop her with his tentacles he tries to eat KFS.
Hyorin is able to save KFS and Witten but KUI devour Hyorin in on bite. QXXRLS appear and try to cut down KUI but the creature kept growing and growing making any wound heal immediately. KUI start to absorb the energy of the quantum bomb and that of the creation by using the hole in the creation as way to a achieve such a thing.NMD sees the madness of the battle he sees QXXRLS getting beat up to a pulp in the verge of dead.
NMD: This ends here you and my children die tonight.*NMD open a portal to Oblivion (The area where immortals can be destroyed) he then absorbs the energy of Oblivion and that of the Quantum Bomb.

(Listen to the video while continuing to read, stop this video when you reach the next video)

NMD puts the energy on the crystal and uses his body as a conductor and his soul as a amplifier.*KUI devour the base and NMD in one gulp. KUI become even bigger but inside Hyorin has being destroying KUI body from his inside but it has prove useless. NMD uses his power and teleport Hyorin to the rest of the group. This is the last thing you will ever eat you unholy demon. He breaks the crystal causing it to explode with his body and soul as conductor and amplifier. The blast causes the biggest sun like star in the universe destroying KUI inside but to save QXXRLS and the rest of the gang. He had it made to unexploded upon itself causing the star to become a black hole that not only devour KUI body it also teleport whatever is left of his unconscious form into the Oblivion .But the black hole become too big and start to devour the rest of the parallel universe in a matter of nano-seconds. Teleporting is to slow because of the black hole. Witten uses his power to create the hardware of a ship; KFS uses her particles to make the software, Raijin uses his endless energy to power the ship, QQXRLS uses his living nanites so they ship can adapt the energy of the black hole into a energy supply this create a void ship(A void ship exist outside of the universe is able to travel thought the cracks of the creation as away to assess parallel universe time doesn’t move inside the void ship you could spend eons on the ship without having pass a second to you ,it is used as a way to get to a far location in a certain time in space),
The void transport the gang back to Dr.D universe. The void ship dissipate in to nothing .Raijin: Shed a tear for NMD


It will continue: Next part “aftermath.”

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Oh my, this last chapter KICKED ASS ! ! !

EPIC

The music was fucking perfect, I like the nice little wat NMD killed himself for "his people" and the nice way KUI was evil. Now i would like to ask you two one thing.

First i would like to ask you to allow me to block some small plot holes you gat there. And second, as NMD is dead, will he now use some othere name or will he somehow come back ?


Oh and in the long run i don't like the fact you stole things from TV plots (Bleach, Dr.Who, Soul eater and a few otheres) i can get over it.

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Who stole from souleater because i never did i dont even know what souleater is(is it a tv series,anime,manga).Thanks for saying that was epic i work my ass off on this one.Witten just wanted me to put that he kick KUI ass at the end.But i thought that would be to cliche if i was gonna die i was gonna be by killing a true villain.I wanted to make KUI a Monster that was so powerfull it could have kill off the selfcreator and have done alot of damage in to the multiverse.The rest of your reply will be awnser whith my meseage.Srry for the lack of gramar or spelling in my replys i am in a hurry.

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QXXRLS leave Witten gang without saying a word. Raijin make a statue of NMD as a memorial token for his sacrifice. Raijin put a seal that make a electric connection to the statue to the creation making the statue impossible to destroy. She carve a homage to NMD at the bottom of the statue. Its says “Here lies the memory of NMD, may he rest in peace”.Raijin leaves the universe and return to her home world

*QXXRLS returns to NMD base* The blob start to mutate and becomes a pod like being. The pod solidifies for a few minutes then it breaks like an egg. Then a goo like liquid come from the hardened pod. The liquid becomes a clone of NMD.

NMD: Well that fight sure lasted longer that we had plan but did you got it QXXRLS.

QXXRLS: Everything went as plan.*QXXRLS take out from his inside a small piece of NMD crystal.

*NMD put the crystal in the main computer*The main computer show all the memory of KUI. The memory of KUI gives NMD the information about the self creators and there secrets.

NMD: With this info we can finally begin on my new body

QXXRLS: (He shouts)Were the fuck do we begin?

NMD: Shut up you will awaken the sleeping army.

QXXRLS:I still cant believe that they Devil Apple member really think that (The children) are the army you made to the Six L.O.C.

NMD: The fools from Devil Apple members really truly believe that I made a robotic army for my old master. My master have no need for another mindless army of robots. My master army that I made for him is still on standby until they are needed by there master.

QXXRLS: Didn’t your master told you to keep the crystal intact our something really bad would happen?

NMD: Yeah but were in one piece so it couldn’t be that bad. I guess he just wanted to scare me or something. We have to many things to do to worry about that sort of stuff.

QXXRLS: I shall begin constructing your new body immediately

While NMD and QXXRLS prepare NMD new body with the crystal information a ancient seal begin to become dangerously weak.

This will continue on my new fan fiction

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Note: Us LoC are not dumb, we know whan some bad (or for S interesting) shit is going to happen

Dr.D: I sense a weakness some where in my creation.

Dr.R: What do you mean by that ?

Dr.D: Umm, It's too soon, the think one of the seals is breaking too soon. I think some one is trying to open one of my great seals.

Dr.R: What ? No one even knows about them. And if they do, what use is there to opening them ?

Dr.D: Well, I'm not even sure it's that. It's very weak. Coll S, We need to open her seal of Logic.

Dr.R: Your too paranoid, i bet it's nothing again. But a check is never too bad of a idea.

*R colls S to MJ13 (The base planet of Evil Corp), S seems to be back from a long day of slaughtering as she is covered in blood*

Dr.S: What is it now ? I was just getting to the good part, whose little mortals were so much fun to play with. *S seemed to be VERY irritated*

Dr.D: Na nothing much, but i need you to make a small check for me. I sense something is wrong. It's probably nothing.

Dr.S: WHAT, you colled me just for THAT ? *D broke her knees to make his point.*

Dr.S:Sure. *S rolls her eyes as she says that* *As S breaks her seal she start to see again all that she made in creation as her logic started to control her*

Dr.D: Well ? Anything wrong ?

Dr.S: *S seemed very calm and not at all like herself, as if she was in total peace of mind.and she answered in a calm voice .* All stands in a place, logic is well.

Dr.D: I don't care about your shit, is something wrong for ME.

Dr.S:* S looks at everything and checks again and again* Well, i think that seal we made is broken.

Dr.D: What seal ? I made so many i don't remember helf of them.Which one ?

Dr.S: The Sinner Seal.

*D quickly summons all of his agents into the throne room. (it's more like he just teleports them there, one of them gat teleported there while he was in the shower.Good thing he shape shifted quickly into something more respectable)*

Dr.D: Oh sup all of you, i gat a little job you need to take care of.

*The agents knew that when ever D had a "little job"" that it was infact a start of a total all out WAR.*

Dr.D: i need you to destroy every none active universe and ... ummm ... oh ya, don't live any one alive ... no servivers ... and one last thing: FIND WHO EVEN IS TRYING TO BREAK THE SINNER SEAL AND BRING THEM TO ME SO I COULD UNCREATE THEM ! ! !

*D's rage causes a small wave of uncreation to start and it uncreates his agents skin and eyes off. As D's agents regenerate they started to tear pass ways to othere creations to start there work.*

*R teleported away to MJ5 as she knew then when ever D is in total rage that he would grabe her and drink all of her blood till he kills her. She wasn't too fond of that and she knew that MJ5 was a planet he hated so much that he would not even follow her there. S at that time however went back to her "normal" self and seemed very happy to know that a lot of blood is going to be spilled.

D was wondering if he should coll his son back from his mission to take care of that problem himself.*


(Note: MJ5 is Evil Corp's main embassy and law planet. Where all of the bureaucracy is done and where all of the political centers are.)

PS: To make all of this took me about 15 min, i think i'm going to work more now.

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*witten put his feet up on his desk and looks out the window, hyorin is busy working on repairing and recovering all the records from before the fight*

witten : well, it looks like the fight had some benefits, everything has a silver lining. for us, it's this KICKASS new "research headquarters and housing facility". originally this planet was to be used as the LOCs' personal pleasure palace but we got it instead! awesome ain't it, hyorin?

hyorin: *too busy to talk* hmm..? yeah, right.

witten: i guess all that nagging worked; after about the millionth time i asked d if i could create an army fan service chicks and was denied because "its not respectable enough" or "S & R would kill me if i allowed it" or some shit like that. but anyway the point is he finally said; "fuck it, FINE, i'll give you my pleasure palace planet instead. it didnt have enough blood an tea for it to be my pleasure palace anyway" . unfortunately with KFS around its more like just another planet though.

hyorin:whatever, yep, thats great.

witten: wait a minute, we finished our assignment hours ago, what are you working on?, and where is KFS?

hyorin:i'm breaking the illusion security barrier and sending the location of our planet to our new friends and KFS is welcoming them?

witten:friends? what'cha talkin bout hyorin?

hyorin: did she not tell you? we found another self-creator, two actually.

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