"Luke dives in after her. A few long seconds pass. Luke leaps
out of the hole like a dolphin with Alice in his arms. Alice
is frozen inside of a perfectly shaped ICE CUBE. Luke exits
the cave before the entire thing collapses and falls into the
arctic ocean."
I honestly don't know how to respond to something like that.
seriously dude, you had a huge thread about this where people gave you honest (yet harsh) feedback. you started a new thread in this forum and in the general movie shit forum. whats up? is it a new version? i read part of the original but had to work so I didn't get very far into it. Is this new? have you taken the feedback others have given you and re-written it?