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I'm putting my script on here for people to read. Please be nice and give constructive criticism.

The story is about a polar bear that becomes a super hero with ice powers.

http://www.filedropper.com/zerodegrees


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Didn't you post this already..... *coughs "zero talent" coughs*

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Can I sample it liberally?

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"Luke dives in after her. A few long seconds pass. Luke leaps
out of the hole like a dolphin with Alice in his arms. Alice
is frozen inside of a perfectly shaped ICE CUBE. Luke exits
the cave before the entire thing collapses and falls into the
arctic ocean
."

I honestly don't know how to respond to something like that.

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mock it.

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seriously dude, you had a huge thread about this where people gave you honest (yet harsh) feedback. you started a new thread in this forum and in the general movie shit forum. whats up? is it a new version? i read part of the original but had to work so I didn't get very far into it. Is this new? have you taken the feedback others have given you and re-written it?

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You just like to be ridiculed, don't you?

Everyone made fun of your horrible script the last time, and this time won't be any different.

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you know you should just film it and not listen to anyone( including me).
(oh and i have'nt read)

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The story is about a polar bear that becomes a super hero with ice powers.

That's it. That whole thread was just him pushing our buttons. It's the only explanation for this.

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No, I really want you all to read this script. If you've got something to say I want to hear it.

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For fuck sake, nobody in their right mind will like this script, and the last three discussions you made about it (and deleted) prove it.

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I didn't say anything about you or anyone else liking it. I just want feedback, good or bad.

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Even more negative feedback that the one you had in the other three exact discussions?

You know people hate it, we all told you that, stop.

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