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Two Scholarship Videos! (Feedback Please)
I have just finished two videos for scholarships! So, the middle of my summer is off to a good start.
However, I need your help. Since I uploaded my videos only a few days before the deadlines, I need to make up for lost time. So, if you could, can you watch the videos and tell me what you think. All the accumulated views should make up for lost time.
I prefer you tell me what you think on the websites provided, but if you don’t want to go through the hassle of signing up, I guess you can just tell me what you think of my videos through the comment box.
This is one is called The Toasty Torpedo... Mmmm.... I should be located somewhere near the bottom of the page.
Toasty Torpedo
This one, I would appreciate you leaving a comment on the website.
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Thank you in advance.
However, I need your help. Since I uploaded my videos only a few days before the deadlines, I need to make up for lost time. So, if you could, can you watch the videos and tell me what you think. All the accumulated views should make up for lost time.
I prefer you tell me what you think on the websites provided, but if you don’t want to go through the hassle of signing up, I guess you can just tell me what you think of my videos through the comment box.
This is one is called The Toasty Torpedo... Mmmm.... I should be located somewhere near the bottom of the page.
Toasty Torpedo
This one, I would appreciate you leaving a comment on the website.
Always There When You Need It The Most
Thank you in advance.
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Permalink Reply by MdU on -
The VO in the torpedo one is breathy and the slowed down recording kinda sounds like a tranny, lol.
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Permalink Reply by Shawn Griffin on -
OK, but is the video bad?
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Permalink Reply by MdU on
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I'd hate to say it's terrible, but I did feel some of the others were better. The thing was I wasn't sure what your message was. Sure, you said "eat torpedoes" but I think it needs to be more specific in advertising. Also, you had some shots that were confusing (the prolonged off-center shot of the wrapper after you finished comes to mind and the husky VO is a rather strange choice).
I do think the classical music was really fitting though, so that is one of those happy accidents. And even with these complaints, I still want to eat a Torpedo, so you managed to do a convincing job anyway!
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